Mestlli Mendez
4-15-08
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Revenge of the Toys

I remember that my sister treats her toys badly until that day.
It was on a Sunday morning about one month ago. When I was eleven years old and my sister was five years old. We are going to walmart but at Marina
I didn’t want to go anywhere but I need to. My mom said “Hurry up Mestlli”.
Then we went to the car to go to Marina. It was not fun being in the car.
At walmart it has food, clothes, tools, office supplies, games, and books. Well I didn’t know this place so it was not smart to leave my cell phone at the car.
“My dad came to walmart to buy his tools and mom to buy food, again and my sister came to see the toys, I came because I need to .My sister keep asking me that she want to go to see the toys but I always say ”No”.
My parents were talking to old friend when Thiare got bored so she left. I went after her. I was scared that something bad could happen. Thiare was happy that she was on the toys section. Thiare got mad at me because I came to get her so then she kick me in my leg. “Thiare” then she went of. I was following her because she could get lost. When I was looking for her I saw these cool shoes but then I remember to look for my sister.
I saw Thiare walking to the toys so I follow her “Thiare what are doing!”
“I want to see the toys” in a sad way.
So we went to mom and dad but they were not there. I thought they went to another section. We were walking like ten minutes. I was worried and scared .Thiare starring to cry.
Then we saw mom and Thiare ran to her son she stop crying. Thiare was following her but it was not her .Then we saw our parents still talking with their friends. I think they didn’t even notice that we were gone.
I was scared that I could get lost at a new place because it was my first time to be their.