Maria
April 22, 2008
Writing Block 2
Fair Gone Bad!

It was a fantastic day to go to Monterey fair. I was ten years old. I went to the

Monterey fair on July 13, 2007. I will never forget that day. I went with my family.

It was so fun. It was so big they have a lot of rides so; we went to get tickets to go to

The rides they cost ten dollars for fifteen tickets. My dad told us how we can go to

The Rides. So we went to the Ferris wheel it was like you were going all the way to

The Heavens you were so high up. It was so fun. So we went to see more rides. I was

So Tiger and I feel like I was going to troup. We went to eat. Then my mom gave me

Her phone.

“Don’t lose that phone” my mom said. So I went to see this ride. It was

Like a ship but it was going backward. I got bored and went with my Mom I went

Back and I couldn’t find my mom, dad, so I was so worried and I went looking for

Them but I could find them I started to cry and I was so scared because People were

Looking at me. So I went look for them again so I was so nervous and I Forgot I had

My moms phone I look in my mom phone if my dads number was there I call my

Dad and did answer and I call home and my uncle answer the phone I told

My uncle if my dad, and mom, was their so my uncle said

“There not here” so I told my uncle if he could pick me up he came and ask me why

I got lost. My uncle took me to my house my uncle told me

“To go to rest” my uncle said I will be here in the living room so I went to sleep I

Was so worried and I could sleep I heard some one knocking and it was my mom

And Dad.

“They told me that they were looking for me” and there were so worried. My

Mom and dad told me to not go out there permission and I learn a very important

Lesson. I hug my mom and dad them so hard and finally I went to sleep.